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EJ Trask's avatar

the opening paragraph made a promise and you delivered

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Maximilian Siddell's avatar

Thank you 🙏

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

Very nice! Twist and twist again. I love unexpected surprises, and you got me twice in one short story.

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Maximilian Siddell's avatar

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it 🙏

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Caroline Barnard-Smith's avatar

Woah. This was excellent.

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Maximilian Siddell's avatar

Oh yo. Thank you so much for giving it a read! I’m really glad you enjoyed it.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oooo. 🥹

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Maximilian Siddell's avatar

Heh. Sorry, I know that one was pretty full on.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

No, don’t apologize! It was good!!

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